God School: Assignment 6

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Re: God School: Assignment 6

Postby Borys » Wed Sep 18, 2013 6:35 am

I will be updating, but probably only during weekends.
EDIT: With exceptions, like today.
EDIT2: Yay finished! Finally!
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Re: God School: Assignment 6

Postby LAYF » Sun Sep 22, 2013 9:28 am

Ah.. just seen that you have completed it Borys good work:)
A little hint. if more than 24 hours pass, its alright to double post more or less every time.
and in this case, I think it would have been alright every time you make progress, so that we will notes it :D

So... your assignment.
story wise i Like it, I also like the manipulation of the troll when he looks up, and in general your image editing in this update.
one thing do, I feel like you lack facial animation or some other kind of manipulation to indicate when the troll talks. maybe just manipulating his face to a 1/3 side view or some thing so he looks at Adas. it feels like "the voice" comes out of no ware.. another solution could be to use speech bobbles and lines. you don't even have to put the text in there a simple bobble with an arrow pointing at who speaks and then the text like you have it now ads to understanding the image.

I also like the small blood splatter on the trolls head in the last two frames...
Now the best thing... and I really like this touch of detail, its the last image, where you can see the goblins hand and ear sticking up. nice touch.
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Re: God School: Assignment 6

Postby Borys » Sun Sep 22, 2013 9:35 am

Thank you!
I know about facial expressions problem, but I didn't want to mess with it for a few reasons:
1.) I was in hurry.
2.) I tried it, but it was looking really bad, so I didn't want to destroy the image.
3.) I'm one big lazy beast.
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